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A poem I wrote back in 1977

By: sweetp

Fall River : MA : USA | 2 months ago

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I wrote this poem when I was in High School back in 1977. I came across it not to long ago when my daughter had to write a poem for school.I went looking for some of my old poems to show her. She was amazed that her mom had written some poems. Anyway it encouraged her to write more. Hear is one of them.

Nature

Let the sun rays hit my naked body with the gentleness of a silent sound

Let it turn my skin a tone of brown

Let the gentle rain fall upon my face

Leaving a clean of trace

let the snow freeze my hair

And hit my face that is bare

Let the Autumn leaves hit the ground

So I may jump within them with a single bound

Let the air of the earth be fresh

So my body becomes clean with every breath

Let the trees and flowers grow to no end

Because nature is beautiful , my friend

So ther is one of them Enjoy

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Ibrahim_mahmood | 2 months ago

beautiful !!

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ahol888 | 2 months ago

I love the fall.

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sweetp | 2 months ago

Thanks that was done in my hippy days. I always liked it

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Punditty | 2 months ago

Hippy days are here again! Good find, thanks for posting.

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ladym33 | 2 months ago

VERY NICE POEM

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Sigfy | 2 months ago

That was really amazing! :]

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rroxas08 | 2 months ago

i enjoy reading your poem. you should continue doing it, thanks for sharing this...

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sweetp | 2 months ago

i have sevral more i will post them the future.thank you the best will come

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desertwriter | 2 months ago

Very nice poem and very meaningful. I've written poetry myself although I tend to write verse that doesn't necessarily rhyme. I am also the author of two published novels and I'm working on my third. I am concentrating on novels for and about young people who face so many situations from today's society and I write about young people facing these issues and conquering them. "For Love of Teddy" finds two teen age brothers fighting drug dealers in their town and gives the reader a new kind of hero in the fictional characters.

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sweetp | 2 months ago

I have tried to write short stories before and find it to be hard unless I have 100% focus. I think that what you are writing about is very interesting.

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slydog | 2 months ago

I look forward to seeing more!

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nique0401 | 2 months ago

Was a very good poem nice writing

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BubbleBoy | about 1 month ago

I really like that peom, it was awsome.

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